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Orthodox Blues

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So you think.you can tell

Heaven from Hell.

 

Two Hasidic men

With their ringlets and all

Playing Pink Floyd

Against a Jerusalem wall.

Wish you were here.

Washed over by waves of invaders

Saladin, Richard Coeur de Lion.

In modernity men and women

With no flesh, no fat on their bones

Crowded onto boats in 1946

People fleeing the Shoah - the catastrophe -

Came to weep at the weeping wall

Fight for a land they called home.

Two thousand years in the wilderness

Remnants remained to build

A new Israel, to build 

Yad Vashem -

To build - remembrance.

 

 

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Comments

Frances Macaulay Forde

Fri 17th Aug 2018 02:31

A powerful juxtaposition beautifully captured in a few words, captured, recorded and constructed so well, John.
They say much more than just 18 black lines on a screen. As Hannah said, 'a strong and important poem'.
Now I'll have to read more...

<Deleted User> (18118)

Thu 16th Aug 2018 20:57

Strong and important poem.

Hannah

Big Sal

Thu 16th Aug 2018 15:45

Those first two lines really grab the reader by the throat and force perspective. Excellent read.?

<Deleted User> (18980)

Thu 16th Aug 2018 14:20

I know they took the land illegally from the Palestinians, and I know they are treating them badly, but because of persecution over the centuries and during the holocaust my sympathies lie with Jewish people who needed, still need, their own homeland. Others will come on here with loads of history details but I can't help how I feel.

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