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Breathless

death couldn’t take you

life held you; close, intimate 

to the warmth of its chest

In the shroud of its breath...

Air heavy, hung close;

Crushing words to whispers...

hidden within; within life itself;

that you never understood

the embers of pain, the heat

like hot coals to the lungs, 

as you grasp, scant air 

pulled with the breath...

close; closer to you 

than death itself; 

life holds you, intimate and close

Smothering in warmth...

Only heat to inhale;

The cloying taste of life

🌷(5)

◄ The Opal of my eye

We’ll meet again ►

Comments

DESMOND CHILDS

Sun 19th Aug 2018 07:05

Thank you Darren for the like. Much appreciated.


All the best des

DESMOND CHILDS

Sun 19th Aug 2018 07:03

Thank you Anya and Keith for the likes
Much appreciated.


All the best des

DESMOND CHILDS

Sun 19th Aug 2018 06:58

Hi Rachel,

Words can touch us so deeply, they can be our strength or our weakness. Benevolent or malign...
Such is their power.
I seem to have touch on your memories, if I have, I hope they are happy ones.

All the best Des

elPintor

Sun 19th Aug 2018 00:57

Hi, Desmond,

The instinct for survival is so strong...

I am reminded of looking upon an infant while sleeping after major surgery to save her life--I saw her smile as I contemplated how thankful I was that she was with us.

Words can touch so deeply,

Rachel

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