awkward
(immediacy imminence and urgency) the currency of infraction
is a purchaser of sharpened teeth
and a tongue that should, by now, be relieved
of all extraneous niceties...
Forgive me, because I know you know the lies
and strong truths and distillations that
we forsake through the unspoken understanding
that tastes so much like sugary unpalatable placation
of lonesome souls inhabiting silent isolated places.
elPintor
Wed 22nd Aug 2018 23:00
Hey, David,
My apologies for taking so long to respond--I often go a little silent when I find things hard to explain.
It is a sort of statement. I wrote this weeks ago and hadn't planned on posting it because it just feels too personal. But, I did anyway and here I am.
As far as the title goes, I changed it just before posting. I meant it to refer to "awkward silences" and hoped it might serve as a sort of pointer to the deeper meaning. I keep things vague, purposely, but I don't want it to seem as if I'm just throwing words hoping to hit something.
Your comments are completely appreciated. You really are an original...
Rachel x