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awkward

(immediacy imminence and urgency) the currency of infraction

 

is a purchaser of sharpened teeth

and a tongue that should, by now, be relieved

of all extraneous niceties...

 

Forgive me, because I know you know the lies

and strong truths and distillations that

we forsake through the unspoken understanding

 

that tastes so much like sugary unpalatable placation

of lonesome souls inhabiting silent isolated places.

🌷(7)

◄ waters

disconnect (regenesis in infrared) ►

Comments

elPintor

Wed 22nd Aug 2018 23:00

Hey, David,

My apologies for taking so long to respond--I often go a little silent when I find things hard to explain.

It is a sort of statement. I wrote this weeks ago and hadn't planned on posting it because it just feels too personal. But, I did anyway and here I am.

As far as the title goes, I changed it just before posting. I meant it to refer to "awkward silences" and hoped it might serve as a sort of pointer to the deeper meaning. I keep things vague, purposely, but I don't want it to seem as if I'm just throwing words hoping to hit something.

Your comments are completely appreciated. You really are an original...

Rachel x

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