ILLUSION
ILLUSION
Just for a while
The feel of summer,
Fields of sunflowers,
Light dazzling,
Heat caressing,
France not Cheshire
Kind of summer.
Smell of lusty earth,
Taste of young wine
That won't travel,
Freshness of fruit
And vegetables,
Proudly displayed
On market stalls.
Just for a while
The illusion of summer,
Our bus winding its way
Through the business park,
Stopping and starting,
Picking up,
And putting down.
David Subacchi
Martin Elder
Tue 28th Aug 2018 16:36
I really like this and I think it is as much about the rhythm of the piece as it is the words and what you describe here. I love the repeat of 'just for a while'
Nice one David