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CHITTER CHATTER...SHHH

Silence is golden

but 

pure solitude 

is deafening

 

I chose to be with you

and to be with me

 

No need to share a roof

at our age

 

Your chatter can be 

delightful

when I know it can be

turned off

with the close of my front door

 

Having mornings with

nothing but me

and the air

help me to care more for you

when days are to be filled with two

 

There's something wonderful

about romance

in older years

 

It can date back to 

the time

we had a curfew

 

So excited to see your beau

no strings attached

just butterflies in your stomach...

 

Forever.

 

By Lynn Hahn

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Comments

<Deleted User> (19980)

Tue 11th Sep 2018 10:48

Droplets of love fill your heart, its when the butterflies start, your thoughts are very happy...makes me quite sappy!?

Mature love is the best!

Lovely poem?

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lynn hahn

Tue 11th Sep 2018 01:24

Thank you so much. ?

Big Sal

Mon 10th Sep 2018 03:35

Every stanza imbued this piece with a more diverse layer and more soul each successive time. Well done Lynn, it came out sounding great.?

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Don Matthews

Mon 10th Sep 2018 01:30

Yes I also liked it Lyn. A perfectly chosen title ?

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Marie Alyza

Sun 9th Sep 2018 22:29

I enjoyed reading this so much I've read it five times! Added you to my favourites. Thank you for sharing.

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Peter Taylor

Sun 9th Sep 2018 20:57

Hi Lynn,

This is a lovely piece with superb control and authority, a lesson in balance between opening a door just so and leaving it ajar for the reader to find his or her way through it.

Whatever, I enjoyed reading it.

Peter T

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