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Journey to the Light

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Quilt of darkness spread over my soul,

I walked to the bridge with exact toll,

But there was no one to let me pass

I waited for long; then sat on the grass.

 

But 

Had no clock to tick the time,

To keep me sober I started a hymn,

As I uttered, the silence danced,

Few words fled, few got enhanced.

 

Then

The gushing river her waters black,

With the dirge-rhythm, its flow slack.

A mammoth wave curled me round,

The Tunnel led to the long-lost ground.

 

Yes

I found the road I longed to trek,

The unending tunnel wherein I wake,

I walked slow and sound in the dark,

Be one with the way; with hope I lurk.

 

Slowly

Days and nights came and went,

The darkest tunnel with a single vent,

I see the light, warm and bright,

Worries and Hurries, I won’t fight.

 

So

I walked, strolled, ambled through

Every step, I took was true...

Hurdles and Pains slept with me,

I know, some day I shall be free.

 

Thus

Went on and on and reached the last

Almost there, but won’t go fast.

I will sleep like a new-born tonight

Tomorrow I shall meet The Light.

 

 

from an old collection, possibly 2009

 

 

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Tapashree Roy

Tue 11th Sep 2018 10:19

Neressa, thanks! This piece has been close to my heart, written when I was younger but perhaps wiser.

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Tue 11th Sep 2018 09:32

Dark and light, I start to fight, Chose to go, But feel so low, In the end, I chose to mend, Finding the light, So mellow but bright?

Loved it...well done?

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Tapashree Roy

Tue 11th Sep 2018 06:10

Thanks Anya, Sal, Mrinmoy for reading and liking Journey to the Light. Your feedback keep me inspired ?

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Mrinmoy Dey

Mon 10th Sep 2018 19:46

Hurdles and Pains slept with me,

I know, some day I shall be free.
Beautiful , roy. I loved it.

Big Sal

Mon 10th Sep 2018 17:05

Great title to a great piece.?

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