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When My Love Died Today

A love so strong
It felt so right
But my love was wrong
I cannot sing a love song
For my love died
But I  regained much pride
In so much that the eulogy for my love’s funeral
Is quite long

When my love died today
For once in my wronged love life
I was able to walk away
Love died a horrible death
I broke down and cried so loud
That God heard my soul
Touched my spirit, He found
Laying below with my love
He Lifted up my spirit
Now standing above ground

When my love died today
In Spirit
I have nothing to say
God held my hand
Walked side by side
He spoke to my soul
Where true love have always been
On the inside
God was waiting on me to let Go

L.J.
(C) 2018 E.O.I.R.R 2002

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Comments

Big Sal

Wed 26th Sep 2018 14:25

The repetition adds to the emotion and keeps it tethered in suspenseful melancholy.

Well done.?

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