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time well spent

 

the scars you wear 

emblazoned upon your heart 

push you forward, yet drag the weight

of trouble seen
 

in ladybug red

galloping to freedom

storm clouds crying

on the detour around the dead
 

we all are drowning

even when it's dry

raging scenery dancing in the mirror 

time is an illusion to no one 
 

fractions of love

never added to much of anything

but your kiss resting on my skin

brings daybreak near
 

a noose and a necklace

hung together in the closet of my life 

racing to be worn

before the dawn

🌷(2)

◄ twisted lines

the endless trip ►

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Ian Perlman

Sun 30th Sep 2018 14:57

Thank you

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Poetikaly Anointed

Sun 30th Sep 2018 04:19

Lovely and emotional write.

Awesome lines here:


the scars you wear

emblazoned upon your heart

push you forward, yet drag the weight

of trouble seen



I dig the last stanza too.

I can so relate!

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