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Too Late

Too Late

 

This day is another day

in a sea of weeks

and an ocean of years

Time punctuated between

darkness and light

Man a solitary figure

a freckle on a swirling planet

Time past and present

have witnessed only a fragment

of what lies ahead

That is if a future be greater

than the sum of the past

We make only the merest contribution

to this cyclical time machine

The planet is eroded and destroyed

by our neglect and greed

Are we worthy recipients

of a celestial gift from the Divine

Only to engage in folly

posturing and ignorance

We cannot even live together

without harmony as the vicitm

of violence and fear

 

O Tower of Babel let us speak as one

not some babbling brook that meanders nowhere

Cannot we gird our intellect

to a common endeavour

to champion love as our human banner

Have we left it too late

are we already foresaken

Pray not, as perdition

shall be our destiny

if we cannot make amends

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<Deleted User> (19836)

Sun 14th Oct 2018 19:47

BRAVO! If this is not a POTW then I don't know what is!?

Man a solitary figure

a freckle on a swirling planet

Time past and present

have witnessed only a fragment

of what lies ahead...........PERFECTION KEITH!?

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Martin Elder

Sun 14th Oct 2018 16:58

'posturing and ignorance' seem to be the key words in this poem for me Keith. I think also although we may feel that we have no effect by writing and posting very often it is a question of chipping away at the stone rather than trying to take a sledgehammer to a situation.
Nice one

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 14th Oct 2018 14:18

Yet we are the only species that seems to understand what
- and when - damage is done and can (and does) take steps to remedy it. We have the gift of foresight that allows this and for every "man-made" hazard, there appears
on the horizon a man-made solution or response. Even
the appalling destructive forces of nature that are beyond
our control can - and are - addressed and repaired by
the human presence. Without that presence, the world
would sink towards a wild dangerous place that defies
our worst imaginings.

<Deleted User> (9882)

Sun 14th Oct 2018 10:49

wowsers Keith! top shelf material man!





Rose ?

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keith jeffries

Sun 14th Oct 2018 10:13

Thank you all for your interesting and thought provoking comments. What I write in this poem has everyone´s agreement but also that we offer no solutions. It is indeed a dilema. The present situation is exacerbated by a society, yea a world where the gap between the wealthy and the poor widens by the day. Power, the ability to challenge this can only come from a moral impetus which affects the lives of all. Poets such as we, can be voices of dissent, prophecy and to enlighten but it must be a ground swell movement to bring about real change.

The one guiding moral force was the Church but this institution has discredited itself in so many ways as to become a part of the problem. Common humanity through education is the only hope for us to redeem ourselves before the knell of doom strikes.

Thank you all again,

Keith

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Don Matthews

Sun 14th Oct 2018 00:36

I'm with Ray on this Keith. As much as we don't like the way things are going it will take mass people movements to have any effect. Society has become too greedy and lacking in empathy. We can write poems (which fellow poets will appreciate, yes) till the cows come home but it won't make a scrap of difference. Sadly.

On the other hand, poetry provides an individuals way of 'getting it out' and expressing themselves. Even if we end up being voices in the wilderness.....

I feel the same way as you Keith. Your poem expresses it well ?

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raypool

Sat 13th Oct 2018 23:06

Sadly Keith all we can really do is our own thing whatever that may be, and that's all anyone really does in truth. If we want to be saviours of the world we need to have a guiding light. Some have that, like yourself, many don't. There is fire and brimstone in your poem, and is a genuine plea, well done.

I feel perdition is an old testament kind of word and not really helpful in normal parlance, but it adds weight to the poem undoubtedly.

Ray with respect.

Jemima Jones

Sat 13th Oct 2018 21:19

and while we tarry time is passing. A great poem Keith. Thank you. Jemima.

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Taylor Crowshaw

Sat 13th Oct 2018 19:36

Excellent poem Keith..?

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AVISHEK GHOSH

Sat 13th Oct 2018 17:28

Superb.Read again and again. Thanks for sharing.

Big Sal

Sat 13th Oct 2018 17:24

Great piece Keith, and the last three lines end it well.?

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