fable
a white dove was sitting on my pillow
soft on soft
white on pearly white
a cooing purring preening thing
she looked me in the eye
her eye was beady sharp
judgemental dark.
A small red fox was crouching
at the foot of my bed
he grinned at me
his hot coat burning in the dark.
I liked him better than I liked the dove.
The dove said “don’t do it
be good be good
like a little girl should.”
the fox growled softly
“if you want it, take it
I would I would.”
And I lay between them like a
stone figure on top of a tomb
with the dove at my head
the fox at my feet
and then I fell asleep.
And when I woke the dove was gone
and the fox was gone
but the room was full of feathers
and eiderdown.
<Deleted User> (6895)
Wed 20th Jan 2010 18:42
Good evening Ann.Avery Dove-like reading!but(and I mention this respectfully)it could have done with slightly more emphasis in a-few-places-i.e-but the ROOM-was full of feathers AND eiderdown.Sorry!for-If I had Horse-reading...11/10...for this reading....99~9%!little in it but worth a few more mic tries? says me,who has never done one audio-till very soon! can you wait? now wheres that skull and 'me tights?lol! Stefx