toxic train track
metal waste raindrop
incarcerated too long too late
no reply.
faintly.
Risk until one always.
Any ways. Anyways.
fastforward. Visual rewind
incongruity. Incongruous.
Inferior absolutes. Taste
lingering remnant after
gauzy impossibility.
Ending. Search mystified.
Final helping of emptiness
Thank you, Sal! I appreciate that you always give such positive feedback. Thank you for taking the time to read my poems!!
Big Sal
Thu 6th Dec 2018 14:17
The word choice made it feel like two separate poems fighting for the same page space. But don't take that as a bad thing - it came out sounding great with the word choice, diction, and adjectives used!
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Big Sal
Sat 22nd Dec 2018 01:12
Lovely work as usual. I know I already commented on this, but I came back to read it again.
It's that good.?