Astral Weeks
This is a good exercise, I enjoyed doing it. All you do is listen to songs and interpret them innocently but not in depth.
Translations encourages you to play music and to write down the words you hear first, irrelevant of the original lyrics. Commonly, people do this all the time when singing along to songs. Having no idea of the words but, just saying what they think it could be.
I chose Van Morrison because the rhythms behind this song are driving and sustain lots of mad thinking. Interestingly, the album also has a before and after vibe, with four songs expressing innocence and the last four expressing experience.
I feel the album communicates the same romanticism of poets like Blake, Coleridge.. It has a dream like visionary quality. Not like this version which, completely brutalises some of the most powerful music I’ve heard in along time.
However, I would feel free to upset a song like this again with a first word that comes, first word I write down/say/sing/frotha bit while saying it, technique. Interestingly, Kerouac said ‘First thought, best thought’ but, he did die while watching a cookery programme called the galloping gourmet on the dreaded machine. He was a poorly, but beautiful beautiful man.
Looking to submit to this feature? Email your poem together with a brief explanation of the inspiration behind it to lauren_bolger@hotmail.co.uk with the words [translations submission] in the subject line.
It doesnt have to be a favourte song, it can be just any song where the tune feels catchy but the words are unclear so you just write down what you think they sound like or it could be a favourite song and your just using the music to rewrite the words
If had cherry’s enter my bloodstream
Between the marzipan and whipped cream
Would I run to a voice from the back
Could I buy pens from the front doorstop
Would you find me? Could you kiss my eye lids
Lay me down on the back stand easy to be bored again
From the far side of the notion
If we put three wheels in motion
Standing is dangerous
Trying to do my very best yea.
There you go yea, there you go
Standing with a look of Everest
Talking to one of a victim
You got my picture in the wall
Whisperings in the hall
Don’t point the finger at me
Don’t Pointing yea.
There you go, there you go
Standing in his little red dress
Talking a band man
I see he got issues
Little shoes
I see hes got clean clothes
There you go well, there you go
You got your picture on the wall
Your foot in the door
Don’t point the finger at me
There you go there you go
Standing in my side of the road
Trying to do my very best
Would you find me? could you kiss my eye lids?
Lay me down silence easy to be bored again
Again again again again to be bored again
There you go standing in my, my shadow rust
Yea there you go
Silence easy
To be born again Darling yea little red shoes
Hmm yea little red shoes
My cherry cherrys blind