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Break away

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My love,

I wish you could see,

the beauty that awaits to be

a part of your experience,

a part of your reminiscence.

 

If only you cut off your chains

instead of your wings,

your views would be so different.

 

My love,

What are you waiting for?

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Larissa Pereira

Sat 29th Dec 2018 02:06

Thank you ?

Big Sal

Fri 28th Dec 2018 23:26

Great piece.

I'm sure you already know though - that 6th-7th line is an excellent proverb.?

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