Body on a beach
There's a body on the mid-winter beach
Bloated by sea water, battered by waves,
The skin is an indeterminate grey but the DNA
Gives it away: stomach distended, flesh eaten away,
The soul departed leaving a package of flesh behind
With sea weeds dancing from the open mouth
That once kissed another, a mother and a lover
Spoke words of comfort to the dying bereaved:
Religion indeterminate, nationality left behind.
Look at the legs that carried the body
Over rugged montains, across freezing tundra,
Over deserts thirsty, prickly with heat, across borders.
Look at the eyes which read the newspapers
And scanned the phones. Read holy books
And erotic poetry and letters from home.
While a heart that was broken by war, death and loss
Gathered the strength to begin life all over again.
That grey mush was a brain that loved to tussle,
Think and debate. Those fingers wrote elegies
That were gateways to all the planets and stars.
In classical Arabic she argued it was never too late
To begin life again, soon, in beauiful Aleppo.
John Marks
Wed 2nd Jan 2019 11:40
Thank you Po, Jane and David for your comments. Yes, David, the photos and final line of the poem (revised) point not only to the terrible destruction imposed by war in Syria but also to the beauty and affection with which the home country is remembered by those fleeing war. As you know, I'm sure, Aleppo, is one of, if not the, longest inhabited city in the world (8000 years) and was renown for the beauty of the old city. Many, if not most, of those who have fled the war in Syria wish to return in the future. If I had the choice between a revitalised and rebuilt Aleppo and a dysfunctional inner-city tower block, I know which I'd choose. Tragically, this particular person in the poem will never have that choice. Po I often try to write as an advocate for the voiceless and if I've managed to accomplish that, even to a small extent, I'm glad. Thank you Jane, I hope that my words have helped direct your thoughts in a useful direction. Wordsworth said that poetry was."emotion recollected in tranquility" and I agree with you David that a period of reflection before writing will often enable a writer to give form to what were in the first place inarticulate emotions: in the case of Alan Kurdi my primary emotions were massive anger and overwhelming sadness. John