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The look on your face when you’re ecstatic.

The echo of your laughter when I’m being facetious.

The strength of your hold when I’m scared.

The physique of your body when I press against.

The softness of your cheeks when I stroke them.

The opulent strands of your hair when I thread my hands through.

The configuration of your eyes when I stare.

The thickness of your lips when they encounter mine.

The profound depth of your heart when I look into it.

 

I still have yet to find you, mystery woman.

 

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◄ AS LONG AS YOU LOVE ME

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Comments

Big Sal

Thu 17th Jan 2019 12:25

The replacement of words in each line aids the retention of information and imagery very well.

Nicely done here.?

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Clarke

Thu 17th Jan 2019 11:58

Nice...

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lisa donohoe

Thu 17th Jan 2019 08:24

Hi Tyler
Each poem you create ' makes my heart sink..
I absolutely ador all that you write.
Keep them coming ??

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