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Untimely critical phase

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Untimely critical phase

Tuesday,5th February 2019

 

Prayers never go in waste

it is a test of the time

one may wonder sometimes

what has been his crime?

 

why so much of hurdles?

and why has he to struggle?

when everybody is happy with joy!

and really enjoys

 

beware of one thing for sure

you are assured

the comfortable stay later

so just from the heart, offer the prayers

 

It shall definitely be heard

and there shall be passing of the word

from the creator or lord

you shall be taken care of now onward

 

feel no sorrow

but allow

the heart to beat

fellow human beings and greet

 

it is an untimely phase

and you shall face

the emergence of the new situation

where you shall enjoy new human relations

 

Hasmukh Mehta

Jadia4708au

◄ No pain to soul

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