Not for me another love
like choking fear
It will not budge
I dare not blink
for it now seems
that by choosing drink
I dwell in dreams
I grind to bits
my words and teeth
when searching through
my history:
to lift above
what lay beneath
all that broken masonry. ...
words and foto Tommy Carroll
Frances Macaulay Forde
Tue 12th Feb 2019 03:03
Very clever. Thank you, Tommy.
marvellous stuff Tommy. Starkness is great. I am personally just a bit too verbose.
Nice one
Really like this, though it's a bit stark, but stark is good it's good.
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<Deleted User> (19913)
Tue 12th Feb 2019 10:33
Lots of layers here, intriguing