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Stippled sky

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The sting of the wind
On this cold spring day
Reminds me of my
Ancestors who rode
This same wind
As they trudged to work
On early shift. 

This  connection, now, is
In my blood
Deep in what I mean 
When I say these words
In tones that rhyme.

Words that would’ve
Carried meaning in those
Hungry days
When this same old
Mottled sky’d
Pleased the eye of 
Those infected with
The old discontents.

So, in this frail copse
Of poplar trees and
Hawthorn bushes
A moment’s respite
Is offered me
As I watch these birds
Swing into this ghost-
Ridden air

And, just for a
Moment,
I’m not there.

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John Marks

Wed 20th Feb 2019 13:23

Thanks for the encouragement Lisa and Dorothy. We poets often plough a lonely furrow - and we never quite know where it's heading John

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Wed 20th Feb 2019 08:16

I clicked on like because there isn't a button for love.

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lisa donohoe

Wed 20th Feb 2019 03:58

John your poems constantly speak volumes, the strength and power behind each line just blows me away.
You sir , are a masterful "extremely creative poet.
Never stop writing ??

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