Light

I am out in a wilderness

Amongst trees, bare and jagged

Amid rusted car bones

jutting obscenely

Where half starved,

nervous animals skitter

Quickened in their distress.

 

I am striving, surviving

just surviving

With every misplaced step

Each stumbled approach

My brightness slides away

 

Now as the fingers of youth

slip from my grasp,

tumble into the past.

I find the proof; that single,

burning light of truth

 

A beacon of hope to reveal

a way for me to heal.

And as illumination grants me sight

I feel alive

I feel light.

◄ Ennui

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Louise Fazackerley

Fri 12th Feb 2010 21:53

yes. yes. yes. me like it. i particularly like the scene set in the first verse. i wouldn't mind some more clarity towards the end- but then i'm a simple soul and like things spelled out for me. excellent work! :)

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