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The Nine.

The Nine.

You could look in all the corners and find something,
it's full and it's thick and it pervades the air.
an unrelenting and galvanic rhythm,
clasping my faculty like a tumour,
vague and delusional.

veracious and laconic,
it bears the sweetness of truth.
Invoking, provocative and deliciously brutal.
dripping bitterness,
incensed and consuming.

Unrepenting and scornful,
conjointed self preservation.
Our convalescant remedy for torrid fury,
rampaging lustfully into reposing.

and stop.
 

◄ Carnality. ( apologies to those i may offend )

Farewell. ►

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 15th Feb 2010 15:03

Me? I love it. I have no idea what the 'it' is, maybe a pub for all I know; but the concept is powerfully transferable to any concrete object or abstract idea. And Hooray for the vocabulary!

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Mon 15th Feb 2010 00:06

Well I liked the Galvanic Rhythm bit ha ha... and the vaguely delusional allusion heh heh.. bit like me after the Tudor the other night ;-))...... TC X

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John Aikman

Sun 14th Feb 2010 22:22

Sounds a bit 'chucked together' to me. Veracious and truthful? Tautological and the same. 'Rampaging lustfully into reposing'?

I can sort of see where you're coming from (so to speak) but it does have the air of something that was just tossed off (so to speak). Florid and torrid...and just a little bit horrid.

But don't be worrid.

:)

Jx

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