A Walk Along the Severn Way
Between winding flow and waving blade,
The pleasant track along the riverside
Peters out to become a dense thicket
Of nettles and thistles.
With tingling legs and thoughts of clothing
More suitable than shorts.
I wave and cry hello to purple haired ladies
Gliding past in the MV Conway Castle.
Pleasant Pheasant runs ahead,
Turning and looking at me.
Seeing me onto the right path,
And sparing me the wrath of the farmer.
He turns away and wags his wings goodbye.
A lone rabbit hops past. His white
Tail flashing its signal of good health.
The small, brown body slips
Down a small brown hole.
Yards later, from that other world,
His white teeth flash their
Message of good will.
Glorious drakes with serene, green sheen,
Mutter to their dowdy consorts.
They discuss whether I am a likely,
Prospect to throw them some food.
They decide I am walking too fast
For that to be likely, and wander off.
Hot and tired, scratched and stung.
I suck a blistered toe and relax.
Calm in the memory of beauty,
And new friends.
<Deleted User> (4281)
Thu 7th Feb 2008 03:26
Hello Malcolm
Your poem speaks volume. lots of interesting lines from your personal observation and love for animals and Nature. In this poem I found a lot of metaphoric expressions.
"A lone rabbit hops past. His white
Tail flashing its signal of good health.
The small, brown body slips
Down a small brown hole.
Yards later, from that other world,
His white teeth flash their
Message of good will."
EXCELLENT WRITE!
Thank you...Zuzanna