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fox dreaming

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Little fox little fox
what are you dreaming?
Cascadings of blood and
downpourings of feathers?
Of red coats and trumpets,
of fleet hounds and horsemen?
Or screamingscreetch couplings
in cold winter meadows?
Of mother’s milk warmth
and the tussles with brothers,
of hiding and seeking
and pouncing on flowers?

Or do you dream nothing
but just soak the warmth up
in your quiet corner
of woodland in springtime,
curled like a cushion,
contented from hunting
your brush like a boa
caressing your nose?

And you look so trusting
curled, sleeping and dreaming.
The hunter is resting
at peace in his nature.
Beneath the ash tree
whose branches are spreading
a flush of green misting
as seasons are turning.

If I could sleep soundly
as you in your country,
no fear for the future
no guilt from the past.
Then I could be free as
the fox in the forest,
go calling my true mate,
be happy at last!


 

 

 

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John Coopey

Sat 20th Feb 2010 21:28

Really liked it, Ann. Delicately done, lovely metre - so structured it feels like it rhymes but doesn't (apart from the last). Also liked the juxtapo of the violence (as we would see it) of "blood and downpourings of feathers" with the foxes sweet dreams (as the fox would see it).

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Fri 19th Feb 2010 17:21

Love the musical lines that woo us along your thoughts which always embrace us with 'immediacy' and 'intimacy' if that doesn't sound too daft.

Maybe you meant 'screech'. I wonder how many readers know what a 'boa' is. Probably more than I think. Have you any memory of women wearing fox pelts as ornamentation?

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Antony Owen

Thu 18th Feb 2010 19:37

I listened your vocals almost whisperlike as if not to disturb the fox. The curled image of the fox is my favourite. An engaging poem full of respect and warmth.

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Thu 18th Feb 2010 18:01

Really lovely poem this Annipoo... I like the sound track too. I watch my dog sleeping in her basket, she never seem to be worried about much, except her dinner maybe ;-)
Luv TC XX

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Ann Foxglove

Thu 18th Feb 2010 17:57

I had to write this for a fox I saw sleeping under a tree near the train track on my way up to London yesterday.

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