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Riding slipstreams

Diffidence weighs heavy so she
clings onto coat tails and hopes for glory.
Desperation permeates while,
bleeding lore,  misplaced and laborious,
she fabricates mediocrity and assumes success.
She's myopic and unheeding,  rejecting negativity
with venom on her tongue and pushing forth anyway.
When inevitability occurs she'll pass blame,
insolently scapegoating and cruel.
Then she'll do it again.
Chasing rainbows until the end.
 

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<Deleted User> (7073)

Fri 19th Feb 2010 18:14

Love chasing rainbow's, great title too, there is an air of dogged determination with resultant inevitable wreckage in this....:-)
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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Fri 19th Feb 2010 15:23

This is a definition of 'chasing rainbows'! Good powerful diction building a strong character. Nobody ever said anything about the necessity of 'noble'.
Fabulous title by the way. And you've been writing for only weeks? I cringe.

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