Three Senryu (I think)
The penny’s that drop
Resonate in the cavern
Of what we have lost
There are no phantoms
Just ghostly consequences
Of past endeavours
With breath there is life
With life there is awareness
With awareness, self
The penny’s that drop
Resonate in the cavern
Of what we have lost
There are no phantoms
Just ghostly consequences
Of past endeavours
With breath there is life
With life there is awareness
With awareness, self
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DESMOND CHILDS
Thu 11th Apr 2019 21:46
Thank you Steve for the feed back, I’m glad you enjoyed my Senryu. I feel I am drawn to this short form of poetry and will definitely be looking into the British Haiku Society.
all the best des