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Goodbye

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Alone with my thoughts 
The breez blew you in
I thought it was love 
Never knew it will hurt

We both walked together 
Start the race with laughter 
Peddling to keep pressure 
Hoping to finish with pleasure 

At the beginning it seems fair
Enjoyed moonlight sphere
But distance came and stare
The game became weird 

Was foolishly blind by daffodil 
Walking with daze
It must have been love 
Now I see wave

Everything was written down,
Nothing is safe on sea shore 
Thought the pencil is strong 
Never knew an eraser could do damages

Thought she needed attention 
The left chest I poured for affection 
The right for protection,
Wrong was the interpretation 

Little rock and roll at dawn
The night lighter than paraffin 
My phone the night companion 
Thought I could hold her forever, 
Everything now air

Heard the sound of my phone
Beeping for already gone 
Never knew it was my heart
Down, no one to lift it
My head filled, like one at war front

Thought I could rewrite everything 
But I ran out of ink
Just when we were at peak
She drew the fabric.

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Comments

Philipos

Sat 28th Mar 2020 17:49

Just been skipping through some of your lines KRO. Your work has great promise and energy. Great stuff. P ?

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Kporho Raphael Oyeke

Sat 13th Apr 2019 09:48

Thanks a lot my friend.


Raphael K.

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keith jeffries

Fri 12th Apr 2019 16:44

This is an excellent poem written from the heart. It bears witness to the often transient and unpredictable nature of love or romance.

Thank you
Keith

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