Mind

In deep pools of stillness 

I drink of time 

as spherules drop

to ripple

Life’s reflection 

Seconds dance forever

Briefly stretching time

Eternal drops of motion 

spilling through 

my mind

◄ Senryu 1

Tanka ? ►

Comments

DESMOND CHILDS

Tue 23rd Apr 2019 07:00

Hi Peter, thanks for your comments very much appreciate. I would like to thank everyone that liked my poem, much appreciated.

All the best des

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Peter Taylor

Mon 22nd Apr 2019 08:18

Hi Desmond,
This poem is a treat: in particular, the dance of units of time - magical metaphor. Many thanks.

Peter T

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