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You would never believe me

You would never believe me if I told you that.. 
there are thorns in my conscience.. 
Of leaving faith and allegiance.. 

You would never believe me if I told you that.. 
there are hidden layers to the spoken truth.. 
Persistent lies lived in the times of youth..
 
You would never believe me if I told you that.. 
dark demons still reside in these caverns.
Dark and light shades of morality yet to discern.. 

You would never believe me if I told you that.. 
there are long battles raging within.. 
Life of  a kindred spirit is yet to begin.

You would never believe me if I told you that.. 
There is a subtle impending sense of doom.. 
But a tiny seed of hope has found fair ground  to blossom and bloom.. 

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mona s

Mon 22nd Apr 2019 17:06

Keith,
Thanks so much for reading and appreciating the poem.. ?

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keith jeffries

Mon 22nd Apr 2019 08:51

Mona,

One of the best poems I have read for some while as it is beautifully crafted. The repetetive line at the beginning of each stanza is a work of art. Thank you for this.

Keith

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