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the secret

 

 

the secret is wonderful, beautiful, cute as can be

 

what would they say if telling them "I love you..." in my own way

 

how can telling them without embarrassing them of the feelings the heart has for them

 

its impossible to control the emotions with the feelings inside 

 

deciding wether if telling them would be wise

 

would they laugh or run and tell me to keep away?

 

it would be the only chance to find out if they felt the same way!?

 

(c)2010 jeff.w 

 

 

◄ which one my dearest?

its not...... ►

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<Deleted User> (6327)

Wed 24th Feb 2010 18:02

@andy : re-edited poem :)

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Andy N

Wed 24th Feb 2010 08:12

enjoyed this, jeff.. watch your spelling m8 as i'm a terrible speller and i spotted at least three spelling mistakes here.Also - 'what would they say if telling them "I love you...."' if i am honest I think is the beginning off a 2nd stanza.

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