Senryu/Hailku

darkness withers too

The echo of your footsteps 

they are immortal 

 

You reach for the sun

And lose sight of the moon

Consumed like a moth 

 

A different world

Moonlight shinning through 

Your open window

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◄ Tanka ?

Gull ►

Comments

DESMOND CHILDS

Tue 30th Apr 2019 20:21

Thank you Steve you’re comments are much appreciated. Thank you mona, Lisa and ana for the likes.


All the best des

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