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The dreaded train

Lying in bed

At night or in the morning

Looking up through the rectangular window

At blinking lights or fleeting white clouds

A perfect still life

 

First an underground murmur

The floor rattles, the window whistles

Then the roars, the thunderous cascades

Interrupted like clock work

clickety clickety clickety

Then the angry crescendo surely

Announces ominous devastation

But no

 

Even a wandering storm dies

 

It is like this several times night and day

A train, either coming or going,

Disrupts life

Every time leaving me with

The sound of my thumping heart

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Coming to terms ►

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Jeannot

Sat 11th May 2019 18:22

Hi Wolfgar,

Totally agree with you. My poems tend to be much darker than my actual life!

Thank you,

Jeannot

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Jeannot

Sat 11th May 2019 18:06

Hello Wolfgar,

Thank you for reading and for your question. What I was trying to convey is the latter in your question, ie knowing the train will come, and with it eventually the inevitable bad news of loss or end, but not knowing when. The dread is in the expectation.

Thanks again,

Jeannot

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