night terrors
I thought i was dreaming.
The light that crept under the door was shifting,
someone was there.
A sudden creak, out there, startled me
and i drew my knees up for protection.
Pleading silently, to no-one, to myself.
As he came around the door,
silhouetted by naked light,
my heart sank.
I wasn't dreaming.
Andy N
Mon 1st Mar 2010 08:13
Nice stuff, Kathryn.. It has a nice structure and pace.. If I am honest, not sure if 'someone was there' line is needed as I think for me it is hinted enough in the first two lines, but I still enjoyed this