If I was rearranging the dictionary I'd put you and I in the caress of barbed wire
The Poetry Jam is an original idea by Steve Garside. Send your audio poems together with the text of the poem (word format or rtf) to stevegarside@hotmail.com
Just so that you can sing along, here is the text of this month's Jam:
A ripened blue plumb
splitting in my skin
the caress of barbed wire
for a while causes pain
but a ripened blue plumb
keeps the beast in the field
so it can remain
adhering to your face
from a distance
where none can harm it
while driving by
bound by parasitic pledge
and it can observe safely from a distance
over the edge
and it can observe safely
from a distance together
walkers such as I
over the edge together
for bitter or for worse
This month's Jam was made by the minimalist-inspired juxtaposition of two poems:
You and I by Winston Plowes
A ripened blue plumb.
Splitting in my skin.
Adhering to your face.
For bitter or for worse.
Over the edge together.
Bound by parasitic pledge.
and
The Caress of Barbed Wire by Tomás Ó Cárthaigh
The caress of barbed wire
For a while causes pain
But keeps the beast in the field
So it can remain
Where none can harm it
While driving by
And it can observe safely from a distance
Walkers such as I.
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