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The moon

"you" are the distant moon
Bright and shiny
yet, so far...away

and I'm the tide,
your smallest change
cause turmoil in me

What I forgot, is that,
the moon is destined
to love the pretty stars
not the distant earth
which is so close, yet,
so far...

🌷(3)

unrequited lovesorrowlife

◄ Courage

Overwritten ►

Comments

Poetique

Wed 29th May 2019 15:22

Thanks for the kind comment Dorothy!!

<Deleted User> (21487)

Tue 28th May 2019 17:44

so delicate and gentle - it is beautiful and dream like.

Dorothy

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