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Lemons on sale again

In the Apple Market

Down Kingston way

Your south London twang

Blew me away

Accompanied the many undulations

Of time

Your wild androgyny

Mirroring the mirror

Of yourself

Skimming off the water

Of an otherwise childhood,

Shaking off, like a shaggy dog,

The misery, uncertainty

Of being David Jones

Like a fluorescent intelligence,

You lit up, spot-lighted,

An iridescence of sound

Ziggy!

Your songs were the water

We needed

Your presence

Snaking through the tube

Watering imaginations

Like a rainbow.

Sitting slap-bang over Baker Street

During the long hot summer of 1976

We thought it would never end

But you knew differently

Ashes to ashes

Dust to dust

Before the silver cord was broken

Before the golden bowl was crushed.

 

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John Marks

Sat 8th Jun 2019 01:01

Makes more sense doesn't it Brian? Especially if you were in London in the 60s. Even in Portobello sprouts beat lemons hands down. But I don't know if it's possible to make a mistake in a poem. 'Appen tis, 'appen t'aint. Anyroadup, thanks for noticing. J

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Thu 6th Jun 2019 07:26

I made the same mistake at first John.

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John Marks

Thu 6th Jun 2019 00:49

What do you think?

<Deleted User> (18980)

Wed 5th Jun 2019 07:36

Is Lemons a deliberate mistake John?

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