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Hi M... fantastic this one W X (One for Sorrow. Will there be a sequell?)
thankyou!
It is really clever and very dense (in a good way) I think I may have said it before, in a Dylanesque way.
Ha! thats ok. Am i writing in a really abstract way? I sometimes worry its too much but then i know exactly what I mean when i write and so i think "ahh, sod it!" However, this is not good if nobody can understand or get anything from it...
Marianne, reading your work intrigues me but I just can't decipher it well enough. It's like buying a posh new camera that has lots of cool functions that you don't know how to use. You know its good, but not really how good. Believe it or not this is a compliment but I don't get it?
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Cynthia Buell Thomas
Wed 3rd Mar 2010 12:35
I enjoyed this conversational style. The poem has some marvellous, novel images and thought associations.
'Am i writing in a really abstract way?' Marianne, you have to be teasing.