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Death to Slow Music

Incense and fragility, she brings death

to slow music and the absence of weight

that's felt in your footsteps is the fading

of favourite songs. She accumulates,

causing peripheral blindness, lunar

eclipses and narrowing eyelids

obscuring familiar haunts. White powdered

exquisitely porcelain shoulders, bound

by black satin, faint lipstick smudges

and traces of blood on the tongue. Love is

posthumous, requesting no flowers,

artless inscriptions, the wearing of weeds

and a portrait judiciously hung. 

◄ Fame of a sort

Lilyism ►

Comments

Rachel Bond

Sun 7th Mar 2010 00:31

my epitaph will be a 3 story temple full of installation art where you can relive being me....past scenes of memory and piles of old clothes, records and books...itll take you 36 years to complete and your only allowed in if you sign your life over in blood to never return to the graveyard. I thought my critics might like it...

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Ann Foxglove

Sat 6th Mar 2010 06:11

I like this. I felt I needed a comma in the second line after "slow music" to get it to scan right when I read it. I love the last bit, from "Love is " esp the last line which is haunting and makes the poem deeper in meaning as it suggests there is a lot more behind it. Maybe the word portrait made me think of that My Last Duchess poem, which I love.

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