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time zones

by

and it's the middle of the night where you are

but I'm here

wide awake

belly full

wondering what you are dreaming about

🌷(7) 

◄ I'm a cliché (mused)

disconnected ►

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Eiren Water

Wed 3rd Jul 2019 15:15

Thanks for the comments, gents!
Eiren x

Devon Brock

Thu 27th Jun 2019 21:37

Digging the brevity and lack of artifice in this poem. While you indicate that you are sated, you drift off into a different sort of hunger. Nicely done.

D

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Jason Bayliss

Thu 27th Jun 2019 19:55

At some point everybody's Wednesday is somebody else's Thursday, strange isn't it?
Lovely little momentary snapshot Eiren.

J. x

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