this face
to your face
tell me what's the consensus
on this violation of your airspace
fistrack this strong jaw
and extend the long arm of your law
between us
bruise me up
dear please
rearrange me
estrange me from myself
show me
the reality of my loss
in a zero-sum game
elPintor
Thu 4th Jul 2019 07:33
I think I got a bit lazy at the end and had to wrap things up a bit more neatly )
Devon Brock
Wed 3rd Jul 2019 22:04
And for all this intense rhythm and image - the gain to loss ratio is precisely nothing. Wow, Rachel. This poem is kicking.
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elPintor
Thu 4th Jul 2019 13:16
Hello, Devon and Jon )
While I'm here, I would just like to say that this is not an appeal to violence, though it might seem so--it's so unnecessary when there are so many less direct means of accomplishing the same things.
Good day to all wherever you are and Happy Birthday to my home in the States.
Rachel