i'm jealous of the wind that caresses your skin
each breath of air that you breathe in
i'm jealous of the birds that catch your eye
their flight so elegant across the sky
i'm jealous of the song that sticks in your head
and the cotton sheets that cover your bed
Hi Branwell, I agree with your suggestion, so you may see a second or third verse one of these days. Thanks for the encouragement!
e. xxx
Thank you so much for the kind comments Lisa. And yes, I do love clean cotton sheets! It's my happy place. ?
e. xxx
Devon Brock
Fri 12th Jul 2019 23:34
Eiren, great poem! And, you got a song stuck in my head, an oldie, I hope you enjoy.
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Insanely Jealous by The Softboys...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FDbwAl069-k
I like this, but think there should be a second verse.
I agree with Mindy, you do have a lovely, fresh style to your writing.
And there's nothing better than cotton sheets!
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Eiren Water
Tue 23rd Jul 2019 00:50
Brock, I'm so pleased that you liked it! Also I loved the song you linked, thanks for sharing! Now I am going to speand way too much time listening to their stuff. ?
e. xxx