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Never be forgotten

The metamorphosis

was a planned operation,

and everything they did

went as smooth as silk,

but what they didn't expect

was the abominable reaction

of the normally patient, decent people,

the bile and the caustic outbursts,

all of the hate that spewed out

into the space around them.

Shocked, they fled and hid in the hills

until the tumult had died down.

They could return, but they knew

that this moment would

certainly never be forgotten.

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forgetnever

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Jon Stainsby

Mon 29th Jul 2019 08:45

Thank you, Keith.

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keith jeffries

Sun 28th Jul 2019 21:16

Jon,

A well written poem which will, I am sure, elicit various responses. It is also intriguing as the reader can only speculate on what form the metamorphosis was. Yet it is in the response of the people which a vehement reaction is seen, one which causes near chaos. Is it that we should plan and prepare more thoroughly or seek approval beforehand. Well written and certainly a poem to stimulate the imagination.

Thank you for this

Keith

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