Are You Happy With Your Poem?
Are You Happy With Your Poem?
Are you happy with your poem
Does it reach your mark
Is it up to expectations
Is it too light, dark?
Do you need to sleep on it
Ponder 'bout a line
Do you think it's good enough
Or needing some refine?
A thought then suddenly springs to mind
Will this poem hurt
You didn't mean to write this in
Will readers you desert?
Then there is the conflict
Who are you writing for
Yourself or for your readers
Which pull is pulling more?
So are you happy with your poem?
It always can be bettered
Your time and effort's better spent
Starting on another......
Don Matthews July 2019
Don Matthews
Wed 31st Jul 2019 00:50
Brian - EAP is pleased with your first line but thinks the next line needs working on.....