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Siphon not Syphon

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I want to throw up days

will life over and end

push every moment 

siphon sunlight through a sieve

make secounds twitch 

sitting where I always sit

Why cant I fasten my life to him

spill over his edge

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Richard

Sat 10th Aug 2019 09:55

My best m8 forever supportive of even the shittest of my poems... Cheers John

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Jon

Fri 9th Aug 2019 18:18

Hi Richard
Great pic plus a natty little poem. I liked the "make seconds twitch" bit and the urgency of wanting to "throw up days"

Some interesting images expressed here m8

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