Bird and Fish
They watch each other through tears,
knowing reasons must exist.
Scoring through, the bold takes,
and rising, gawping heaven, the conversation suffocates.
Comments
i would consider splitting the last line into two as the beat is a little long, but for a short poem - that says a heck of a lot! Good Stuff!
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Donna Marie Beck
Sat 3rd Apr 2010 13:10
Like this Marianne, tis clever. Donna