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*Tramsendental Love*

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Here we both are

Side by side

Just for a few moments

On this Tram ride

Sharing a space

But in two different zones

Scrolling our screens

In the world of our phones

Who is he texting?

Well I wouldn't know

When he gets off

Where will he go?

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Love   love poetry

A Dating Conversation â–º

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Raj Ferds

Tue 13th Aug 2019 20:36

First of all I simply love the title Ruth. Clever.
Then you've captured a real life scenario rather well.
The intrigue is what sets this poem apart.

Keep going!
Raj

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