Deal or No Deal
Deal or No Deal
Real or UnReal
Not sure
What to
Feel
Any more
It's like living in a
Sitcom
Everything's come
Undone
We can
Never be
'Friends'
With our
Neighbours
Next door
Comments
I bet you end up with over 50 new poems a day Don!
Short lines
Yes, like
Long poems
Dislike....
Thanks for your feedback Andy I appreciate that, this is another one that just came to me quickly when I was watching the news, poetry writing is definitely a mindset, a way of being!
like your use of short lines here, Ruth. Works well within the voice of this piece. Good stuff (:
Clever. Ruth
Neighbours. Friends
When will it
Ever end?
And where?......
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Don Matthews
Thu 15th Aug 2019 12:59
Tell you what dear Ruthy
A problem I have got
50's pushing it a bit
'Bout 3 a day's my lot
You ask so what's the problem Don?
System lets one a day
Stay upon the blogslide
Post others? Sends away
To profile bank.....
Moral - don't post more than one poem each day
And get frustrated like me....?