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No time to pause

Tick tock

I am your life span clock 

Tick tock

I see you at the bottom of your rock

Tick tock

I see you at the top of your mountain 

Tick tock

I see you indulging from all fountains

Tick tock 

Wasting seconds 

Not learning lessons

Poping pills for all kinds of depression 

Crying in pillows

Dating the wrong

Not doing right

No sleep 

You sit up all night 

Tick tock

When will you stop

One day I will

i am your life span clock

Tick tock

As you follow your heart

Tick tock

one day we all part

Tick tock

Enjoy creating your art

Tick tock

Laugh as much as you can

Your life's mapped out

The source knows the plan

Tick tock

Do what makes you smile 

Tick tock

Were only here for a while

Tick tock

Enjoy your adventure 

Tick tock

Enjoy mother nature 

Tick tock

Stop doing evil a favour 

Tick tock 

It's time to be your own savoir 

Tick tick tick 

Tock  tock  tock 

I'm forever moving

says your life span clock ....

 

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◄ Mind over matter

Good bye old thoughts ►

Comments

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lisa donohoe

Tue 10th Sep 2019 22:12

Thank you for your kind words my friend. ❤
You always understand my poems and it's very much appreciated
Love and light to you x

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Jason Bayliss

Tue 10th Sep 2019 11:57

Really, really good Lisa! I love the way the rhythm breaks in the delivery of multiple lines between the tick tocks, it really adds to the urgency of the message because the clock ticks on regular beats so the more words between, the quicker you speak. Very clever.

J. x

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