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Great relief

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Great relief

Saturday,14th September 2019

 

Nothing mattered

when earnestly uttered

the holy words in prayers

it was offering a soothing layer

 

what a great relief!

to feel so brief

about the grief

and still no worry to self

 

It is how I surrender

and offer

my indebtedness to your feet

and follow you on the water like ships fleet

 

I am cruising at speed

but with no greed

it has blessings from your side

I take no worry to decide

 

life has various colors

and honor to lead

but I read the clear message

that feels my age

 

Hasmukh Mehta

http://www.poemhunter.com/hasmukh-amathalal/

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