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The men you please

Louise was out with Jim having a meal,

The print was minute on the menu,unhappy she did feel.

"Waitress, a question about the menu please."

"The men I please are none of your business Louise! "

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◄ Devour and Crunch

Accrington ,loose wire fear!This happened Saturday afternoon ►

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Ruth O'Reilly

Sat 21st Sep 2019 09:33

Glad you fixed this Hugh see how nicely the rhythm now flows with please and Louise ?

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