incessant
flotsam to jetsam
life ebbs to the pull of time
incessant decay
past fills with the futures
wave of actuality
Comments
Thu 3rd Oct 2019 20:36
Thank you Martin for your kind words much appreciated. I too do wish, that one day I will write longer poem. Hopefully as good as you. Don, I too like haiku as well as senryu and tanka I think they make you slow down and take a different view on everyday happenings that we would otherwise take for granted. Thank you Keith and Avishek for the likes
All the best des
To me the art of poetry is putting an idea into as few words as possible. Why I like haiku. And it's challenge......
Not easy, as you say Martin....
I sincerely wish I could be a man of so few words when it comes to writing . Wonderfully put Desmond
Nice one
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DESMOND CHILDS
Wed 6th Nov 2019 06:22
Thank you po, much appreciated you saying so.
All the best des