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GRAND MAL

    

And so to school.

A step inexorable

Where softest cerebrum

Yields - bluntly malleable.

 

Where Education’s mallet

Striking bold

Transform base mettle

Into beaten Gold.

 

Where Mammon reigns malicious

In the Son

And in the Daughter too;

His will be done.

 

Till all align, malign

And cancerous

To multiply - excel

Or miss the bus.

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barrie singleton

Tue 30th Mar 2010 10:15

Cher FRANCINE. My school French served but I had to look up 'de pire en pire'. The answer to your query is almost certainly "dans le jardin, avec la plume da ma tante" - but it is very big garden. There is some background info (to Grand Mal) in my answer to Chris - hope you don't mind sharing. (:o)

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barrie singleton

Tue 30th Mar 2010 10:08

Oh I think we are more or less on the same lines Chris. Your careful analyses always wecome. I think the second stanza is my favourite too. I like to play a trick or two. To do you (and Francine) justice, I should explain: the idea came from a conversation with a friend, following a Radio4 program about the 5-year-old brain and school. They spoke of MALLEABLE children and I suddenly realised the 'mal' is that of MALLET!!!!! All was then clear.
Regards.

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Francine

Tue 30th Mar 2010 05:25

Very thought provoking and unfortunately true...

Je vois ce que ça fait le 'Grand Mal' tous les jours à l'école et à l'université...
C'est un désastre, et ça devient de pire en pire, mais quelle est la solution ?

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